Hi. Although I live in Brazil now, I´m an American writer, editor and proofreader, a native English speaker with excellent communication skills and years of experience correcting and improving texts, especially for authors for whom English is a second language. I´ve worked for Italians, Chinese, Vietnamese, Indians, Arabs and other nationalities, and they´re always happy with the final results in perfect English. I use Track Changes so you can see what I corrected or altered in your text, and add questions and comments when I have any doubts about what you mean (doubts that your intended readers will also have). While I´ve never done any animation myself, I´m familiar with the concepts of key frames to tell the story, joined by a series of changing frames, all built in layers with characters and other symbols located in the foreground over a background which changes less than the other components in the frames. That´s about as technical as my animation vocabulary gets, but I´ll easily understand any other concepts you include in your statement. How much longer do you want the text to be - about how many more words? For 1 page, I usually only charge $5, but the minimum here is $10. Anyway, please contact me to do the job, and I can get the revised text to you in 24 hours - also, any changes you want after I deliver it, just let me know. Best, David