Proofread Something

I am currently working on a material related to dating tips. After hundreds of working hours of four people (mostly non-native English) the text is in a stage where text has to be finalized. It needs to be proof read/reviewed and also some ghost writing is required. I need a brainiac to make a perfect text. The material consists of 10500 words. I copy a part of text to give an idea on current quality: 1. Melting Ms. Shy Here you have to be careful with questions. Until her ice is melt she will give you answers, which are difficult to roll on as a conversation. She does not do this on purpose. This is simply her personality, her self-defense mechanism. Here you have to be more talkative and touch softly some areas of her interests (based on her app or online profile). Watch her reactions, and invite her to join the conversation without asking questions. Make assumptions like “Oh, you might have different opinion about that” or “you seem to be more experienced in that field”. Work description: - Correct language please. Stylistically it should be up-to date, stylish for US, Canadian, Australian and UK markets. - Compress text where you can but not at cost of readability. - Edit paragraphs in text, if needed. - Avoid and repair redundancy in text if any. - Correct logical contradictions if any. - You can change order or category at any tips if needed. - Reader SHOULD leave with a positive feeling (getting something valuable) after EACH tips. - You can add any of your thoughts! Please do it, what we need is brain input! - Do it as if this was yours…the text needs to be perfect. You can also disagree with anything in the text. Change and comment these please - Judge me! Tell me which 5 advices you find the best and which 5 the poorest. - It would be good to compress the introduction a bit without changing the content and add a word related to “science” (scientifically, scientific, etc.) - Use correction modus in word, I want to understand what you did. - Take care of text style this will have to be consistent – for example italics by examples. Please preserve all underlines this have meaning for further stages. - Find out further examples for opening lines at 3 of the paragraphs. (Will be marked in text exactly) - Find out dialogues for 3 paragraphs according to the advices ~30-60 sec each. (Will be marked in text exactly) - Find out a phone-call dialogue asking for a date. (Will be marked in text exactly)