BoxMovil, by applesandideas
Dear CH, Please find attached my entry. Hoping you like it! I have designed the animated video taking into account all your comments and using only white, black and yellow colors to reinforce your corporate image along the full video. If you honored me by awarding my entry, of course I would remove the small watermark in some corners, change/tweak any required text and export the video in full HD if needed. Any comment, please feel free to let me know, my pleasure hearing from you. Thanking you in advance for your valuable feedback. Awaiting your reply and really hoping you like my work. Best regards, applesandideas
Julkinen selvennystaulu
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Kilpailun järjestäjä - 8 vuotta sitten
Thank you very much, until the moment you are the winner, so please send back to me the video with my comentaries.
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applesandideas
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Thanks to you. Please check entry #14 , that is my updated entry based on your comments. Hoping you like it and award my entry. Thanks for your feedback. Cheers
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applesandideas
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Hi sir, great you like my work! :) Thanks for your feedback. I will review your comments and back to you shortly. Thanks and keeping in touch
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Kilpailun järjestäjä - 8 vuotta sitten
• Minute 1:00 the text it will be better if appear like this :
AHORRA TIEMPO Y DINERO CON :
LOGO
BOXMOVIL.CL
Hope to hear from you soon,
Thanks and best regards.- 8 vuotta sitten
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Kilpailun järjestäjä - 8 vuotta sitten
• Second 0:43 all the things appear going inside the box, but not in the correct side, because the door of the box is the open side, and not the closed side. The same thing with the lock image, appear in the other side…
• Second 0:50 the truck arrive to the center of security and storage: the door show it like was open, but it will be better to show more security of site, that only after arrive is opening the door, and after leave it inside the door closed.
• Second 0:57 the image of the security center doesn’t appear like real thing, is like a black box, it will better to demonstrate something more real like, and with security alarms, persons camera etc. (in the next link you can see illustration of the our place os storage http://www.bodegasanmartin.cl/galeria.html- 8 vuotta sitten
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Kilpailun järjestäjä - 8 vuotta sitten
But more in detail of image i have the next points:
• Second 0:09 – 0:15: the text of reason doesn’t highlights so well
• Second 0:35 the box arrive alone to the home, it will be better to show the box with the truck, and then how it’s parking the box on the space parking and then the truk go away…and only the box stay.- 8 vuotta sitten
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Kilpailun järjestäjä - 8 vuotta sitten
- The spanish text need a little bit correction in some words, so i will working on that and send you soon.
-The font of the text is not so well to read, maybe we can use a different one, also can be more modern …
-the name of the company boxmovi, I prefer to appear like BoxMovil or BoxMovil.cl more then BOXMOVIL or BOXMOVIL.CL- 8 vuotta sitten
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Kilpailun järjestäjä - 8 vuotta sitten
I want to ask you do a small changes...
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Kilpailun järjestäjä - 8 vuotta sitten
I was watching the video and generally its look very nice, the music also are nicely.
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Kilpailun järjestäjä - 8 vuotta sitten
Hello, thank you very much for you work, i love it !!!
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