Translate a Hindi Poem to English

Julkinen selvennystaulu

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  Kilpailun järjestäjä

  • 9 vuotta sitten

  It's great that you tried to translate it. And, I believe you have done it beautiful. But as they say, the moon is never out of blemishes, the translation needs some articulation. I think you have submitted the same entry both the times. I'm going to reject one entry. Hope you don't mind.

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     Ranjit00

     • 9 vuotta sitten

     Thanks. I submitted second entry because there was comma missing between smirk and bloom.

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