Expanse - Modern Design - Process Page
Here's my go at it again : ) I hope I've implemented all the changes you needed successfully. Please don't hold back with any further feedback. I will keep revising this till it's the Best :D
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Kilpailun järjestäjä - 3 vuotta sitten
What other options are there for this icon
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I like your style but lets work on communicating the text through the design. Let me know if there is anything I can help with or explain
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Too much space taken up here. Not very informative
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I'm not a fan of rockets. I think they are overused
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Kilpailun järjestäjä - 3 vuotta sitten
I kinda like the two $ pieces to this graphic but The chart in the back with the line doesn't make sense to me. I also don't really see transparency from the graphic.
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cool but lets swap the position of the pen? I think something else should be in the front
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I know what you're going for here but I do not think this is intuitive. Graphically this looks good but it needs to convey the concept clearer. Most of the graphics should follow this advice
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much better
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I do like this pen and color palette look a lot. Pretty unique and cool
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Incorporate money somehow in this graphic
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I think this section was easier to follow/read when the graphics and text lined up on the left and right respectively
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