Julkinen selvennystaulu

  • creativecoolmz
    creativecoolmz
    • 9 vuotta sitten

    Thank you for your feedback i will send it soon

    • 9 vuotta sitten
  • has12345
    Kilpailun järjestäjä
    • 9 vuotta sitten

    Kindly send an edited version to hashimahmedsuleman@gmail.com. Thank you.

    • 9 vuotta sitten
  • has12345
    Kilpailun järjestäjä
    • 9 vuotta sitten

    The trailer is good generally. Mian feedback is it needs to match the poster theme a little bit more and some of the text seems unclear.
    1. On the first slide- the logo needs to be clearer. Please see the logo effect in the first 5 seconds of this trailer. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z1eSy4GLIxE
    See 18 seconds- the background is causing a lot of glare.
    See 39th second. The text on this slide is too small and again there is a lot of glare from the background. It needs to be set out better and easy to read. The text font may need to be changed and match the poster font.
    The last slide of the video should be something similar to 1 min 13 second of the above trailer.
    Also see 50th second of the above trailer- I like the ‘Register Now’ design effect.

    • 9 vuotta sitten