DAVID LION - MASTER HYPNOSIS
Hello. PFA my entry for your contest. Look forward to your feedback and suggested changes. Thanks - Bhaskar
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kbhaskarsaxena
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Hello. Hope you are doing well today. Just wished to confirm if you have been able to receive the link for updated design. Thanks.
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Kilpailun järjestäjä - 5 vuotta sitten
I like the design. Can you put another call to action here? (button START NOW)
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kbhaskarsaxena
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Hello. I am ready with the updated version. Kindly follow this link to check. I wasn't able to send message via chat and the new job idea didn't work. So hopefully you could check and get back to me with feedback. Thanks. LINK : https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ILSETaaoZmv5Sryt77cWiFYQKYkanD7N/view?usp=sharing
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kbhaskarsaxena
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We could work on color scheme if you like the layout and content. We could add / remove sections or change images and style. Eagerly look forward to your response. Thanks
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Can you work on the text section? I think it is the font that may be too small, or not vivid / engaging enough. But you are on the right path friend
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kbhaskarsaxena
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Hello. Thank you for the kind feedback. 1) I shall add the call to action as requested. 2) Regarding the text section, the font is 21pt and when it would fit Screens, it would be big enough to be legible. However we could definitely work on making it engaging. So, are you looking for changes in the whole section of course details or just in the ' Learn my secrets : How to...' section? Also, to make it more engaging if I use some icons / illustrations? Hope you could respond. Thanks
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kbhaskarsaxena
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Hello. Are you available?
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kbhaskarsaxena
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Kindly send me a message over chat if you wish to receive high-res version. Thanks
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