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Could we make some changes, please?
The text elements disappear too quickly. So I suggest to do the following:
No intro (first 4 seconds). This saves time for the other sequences
No text in the video (instead of this we will have a voiceover)
„Peter and Monica“ appear – but there are 3 persons instead of 2… (starting at second 5)
There should be a big question mark or a thinking bubble from Peter and Monica who are concerned about their financial future (~ second 13) instead of a man who did not appear before sitting in an office and typing something into his computer.
The same man appears in the next scene. Is he the bank clark? By the way: If this person is Peter then he should be removed with the bearded man in the first sequence.
In the bank (starting ~ second 17) it would be nice to have a buliding and the word „BANK“ and some banknotes which are burning. Probably from two fires called „Inflation“ and „Steuern“
In the follwing scene (starting ~ sec. 20) we have again 3 people for Peter and Monica and here again the bearded man should be exchanged
In the scene from ~23 sec. there is only one person (Peter). I think it’s better to show Peter and Monica who commonly like the idea
The same in the scenes starting at sec. 28+34
The person in the last scene (starting at ~40 sec.) should be Albert (same guy as in the scenes +19-23 sec.)
I hope I could explain what I intend!
The video itself is really nice! Well done so far. I just need the changes are done
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