I have recieved this translation and I need a native chinese speaker to tell me if this translation is good and reads like the 2nd text. I offer 5$ for it. Thank you!
Is this Translation fine:
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/* alert title */
"Warning" = "警告";
/* alert message */
"alert message" = "向外呼叫、警报、退出程序。然后本应用程序必须重新启动!";
/* alert button */
"OK" = "好的";
/* More view title */
"More title" = "更多";
/* sleep interval in prefs overview */
"%d mins" = "%d 分钟";
/* if no sleepinterval is selected */
"disabled" = "已禁用";
/* if no prepareinterval is selected */
"disabled" = "已禁用";
/* label over the sleeping slider (includes time) */
"Sleeping: %d:%02d mins" = "休眠:%d:%02d 分钟";
/* display grace period (includes time) */
"Activating in %d secs" = "在 %d 秒内激活";
/* Class = "IBUINavigationController"; title = "BabyPhone"; ObjectID = "25"; */
"[login to view URL]" = "Babyphone";
/* Class = "IBUINavigationController"; title = "Settings"; ObjectID = "30"; */
"[login to view URL]" = "设置";
/* Class = "IBUILabel"; text = "Phone Number"; ObjectID = "11"; */
"[login to view URL]" = "电话号码";
/* Class = "IBUILabel"; text = "Sleep Interval"; ObjectID = "13"; */
"[login to view URL]" = "休眠间隔";
/* Class = "IBUILabel"; text = "Information"; ObjectID = "66"; */
"[login to view URL]" = "信息";
/* Class = "IBUILabel"; text = "The main screen of Babyphone shows the current status, the microphone sensitivity and the threshold for triggering the alarm.\n\nIf the Microphone's display reaches or exceeds the set threshold, the previously defined phone number will be called.\n\nBecause of technical limitations only for iPhone OS <3 (version 1.x, 2.x): After completion of the call and the expiration of the delay Babyphone will reactivate itself again.\n\nIn the settings you can enter the number to call. In addition, there is a sleeping interval with an adjustable delay in minutes, after which Babyphone will reactivate itself again."; ObjectID = "67"; */
"[login to view URL]" = "Babyphone的主显示屏显示当前状态、麦克风的灵敏度及触发警报阀值。\n\n如果麦克风显示达到或超过规定的阈值时,将会自动呼叫预设的电话。\n\n由于iPhone OS 3以下版本(1.x、2.x版本)的技术限制:若完成呼叫,超过系统所设的延迟时间之后,Babyphone会再次激活。\n\n在设置中,您可输入所要呼叫的电话号码;并有休眠间隔,可设置延迟的分钟数。设置完成之后,Babyphone会再次重新启动。";
/* Class = "IBUIButton"; disabledTitle = "Cancel"; ObjectID = "87"; */
"[login to view URL]" = "取消";
/* Class = "IBUILabel"; text = "Activation Interval"; ObjectID = "97"; */
"[login to view URL]" = "激活间隔";
/* Class = "IBUILabel"; text = "Darken screen"; ObjectID = "118"; */
"[login to view URL]" = "屏幕变暗";
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This was the Source:
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/* alert title */
"Warning" = "Warning";
/* alert message */
"alert message" = "An outgoing call, the alarm itself, quits the program. Thereafter the application must be restarted!";
/* alert button */
"OK" = "OK";
/* More view title */
"More title" = "More";
/* sleep interval in prefs overview */
"%d mins" = "%d mins";
/* if no sleepinterval is selected */
"disabled" = "disabled";
/* if no prepareinterval is selected */
"disabled" = "disabled";
/* label over the sleeping slider (includes time) */
"Sleeping: %d:%02d mins" = "Sleeping: %d:%02d mins";
/* display grace period (includes time) */
"Activating in %d secs" = "Activating in %d secs";
/* Class = "IBUINavigationController"; title = "BabyPhone"; ObjectID = "25"; */
"[login to view URL]" = "Babyphone";
/* Class = "IBUINavigationController"; title = "Settings"; ObjectID = "30"; */
"[login to view URL]" = "Settings";
/* Class = "IBUILabel"; text = "Phone Number"; ObjectID = "11"; */
"[login to view URL]" = "Phone Number";
/* Class = "IBUILabel"; text = "Sleep Interval"; ObjectID = "13"; */
"[login to view URL]" = "Sleep Interval";
/* Class = "IBUILabel"; text = "Information"; ObjectID = "66"; */
"[login to view URL]" = "Information";
/* Class = "IBUILabel"; text = "The main screen of Babyphone shows the current status, the microphone sensitivity and the threshold for triggering the alarm.\n\nIf the Microphone's display reaches or exceeds the set threshold, the previously defined phone number will be called.\n\nBecause of technical limitations only for iPhone OS <3 (version 1.x, 2.x): After completion of the call and the expiration of the delay Babyphone will reactivate itself again.\n\nIn the settings you can enter the number to call. In addition, there is a sleeping interval with an adjustable delay in minutes, after which Babyphone will reactivate itself again."; ObjectID = "67"; */
"[login to view URL]" = "The main screen of Babyphone shows the current status, the microphone sensitivity and the threshold for triggering the alarm.\n\nIf the Microphone's display reaches or exceeds the set threshold, the previously defined phone number will be called.\n\nBecause of technical limitations only for iPhone OS <3 (version 1.x, 2.x): After completion of the call and the expiration of the delay Babyphone will reactivate itself again.\n\nIn the settings you can enter the number to call. In addition, there is a sleeping interval with an adjustable delay in minutes, after which Babyphone will reactivate itself again.";
/* Class = "IBUIButton"; disabledTitle = "Cancel"; ObjectID = "87"; */
"[login to view URL]" = "Cancel";
/* Class = "IBUILabel"; text = "Activation Interval"; ObjectID = "97"; */
"[login to view URL]" = "Activation Interval";
/* Class = "IBUILabel"; text = "Darken screen"; ObjectID = "118"; */
"[login to view URL]" = "Darken screen";
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Thank you!