I am looking for an experienced native english speaker, who is able to improve the style of my ITALIAN document (9.991 words), check is for spelling and any grammatical mistakes.
The document type is a excel file. The excel also includes the german and english translation of the text, so you can make sure the meaning stays the same. What I need to be checked is of course the ITALIAN texts, but only the text and words that are coloured red. You find the fist part of the texts in the ITALIAN line (line 8) of the excel. You can do the corrections in the same box or in the line underneath. As you prefer. The second part to be checked is in a column E, starting in line 12.
I attached the file, so you can look at it.