I need some help with my English writing. English is my second language and I have an English exam in one month. Therefor I am looking for an “English teacher” for the next month. Once in a while I will make a text about a random topic and then send it to you. Your job then is to comment my text and provide me feedback on what I should do to make my English writing better. The content in the text doesn’t really matter. It is more on how I write. Give me feedback that will make my text look much more professional.
Why is it that more than 350 million people have English as their first or second language? Why is English is a world language? In this article I am going to talk about why English is a world language, and why it is so important in today’s community.
Here you could write:
Try not to use the word “why” so much! It makes the text much more immature. Use more synonyms to make the text a little more professional. You could for instance write something like this instead.
Today more than 350 million people have English as their primary or secondary language. How come English is a lingua franca? In this article I am going to talk about English as a world language, and why it is so important in todays community.
I will add a text to this project. The person that gives me the best feedback on this text will get the job as my “English teacher” for the next month.