We are building website for MLM program. We are looking for someone who can edit our texts - make them more interesting and professional. I will attach a draft of the text and the text of video animation (cartoon takshow) for the section ABOUT US. This is just to give you the idea what we thought content could be. We will appreciate any ideas and we don't mind if the changes you will suggest are radical. Hope you can help us, we need to finish it soon.