I need someone to write me an advertisement that I can use to promote my website on Facebook/Kijiji/Telegram by directly inviting and convincing them to join my website and start using it. The way my website work is similar to freelancer but instead users can use it to hire contractors.
The following is the text I have tried, the problem with this text is I am talking about Kijiji in a bad way so I want to change it and also the response rate wasn't very good and its not very convincing:
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