I would like to reword a letter to sound "smoother", more professional, and encourage them to pay attention and enjoy it. The letter is going out to people who purchased items for an online RPG / Adventure game from eBay. I have only communicated with them online, but now I want to send them a personal letter in the mail to invite them to my new Website. I have attached my rough draft of the letter, I'd like it to sound like it has a hint of Fun, RPG/Adenture "Tavern" feel, but still feel very very trustworthy and professional.
1) Complete and fully-functional working program(s) in executable form as well as complete source code of all work done.
2) Deliverables must be in ready-to-run condition, as follows (depending on the nature of the deliverables):
a) For web sites or other server-side deliverables intended to only ever exist in one place in the Buyer's environment--Deliverables must be installed by the Seller in ready-to-run condition in the Buyer's environment.
b) For all others including desktop software or software the buyer intends to distribute: A software installation package that will install the software in ready-to-run condition on the platform(s) specified in this bid request.
3) All deliverables will be considered "work made for hire" under U.S. Copyright law. Buyer will receive exclusive and complete copyrights to all work purchased. (No GPL, GNU, 3rd party components, etc. unless all copyright ramifications are explained AND AGREED TO by the buyer on the site per the coder's Seller Legal Agreement).