I am looking for an article re-writer to re-write 4 pages of sales copy for a weight loss pill (sales copy is attached) You will rewrite everything on the main copy block and keep all proper nouns (specific people, times, places) the same.
To be considered for this job, rewrite the following 2 paragraphs so that I can evaluate your skills, and send the re-write to me in a private message:
If you've ever felt guilty, ashamed, or embarrassed for failing to lose weight with strict diet and exercise plans, you should stop immediately. It's not your fault. After all, in today's busy day and age, we can't be expected to have the time, energy, and willpower needed to lose weight and keep it off for good. That's why 95% of all dieters fail to keep the weight off. But there is hope.
Leading research scientists, from the University of Tennessee, recently stumbled upon a proprietary fat loss nutrient that caused study subjects to lose 11 lbs of fat and cellulite even though they didn't cut back on calories. In another study, these same researchers discovered that subjects who received this powerful weight loss ingredient lost a whopping 10.9% of their total body weight--that's double the amount compared to the subjects who didn't get this nutrient! And, what startled researchers the most was...