Women’s Fiction Thriller Revamp

$750-1500 USD

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Julkaistu 16 päivää sitten

$750-1500 USD

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My 110-k-word women’s-fiction manuscript needs a decisive makeover into a lean, psychologically tense page-turner. I want to reduce overall length by tightening or removing subplots while preserving voice and core themes. At the same time, the plot twists should gain an ominous edge that nudges the book toward psychological-thriller territory. Structure is another priority: the story should flow through an interwoven mix of flashbacks and present-day scenes rather than a straight chronology. I already have all scenes drafted, so the task is to reshape what exists—trimming, rewriting, or reallocating material—rather than creating an entirely new storyline. Dialogue, pacing, and perspective shifts must remain seamless after the cuts. Deliverables • A fully edited manuscript, noticeably shorter yet coherent, with darker, more unsettling twists • A restructured scene-by-scene outline that shows how flashbacks and present action interlock • Brief margin notes (or a separate memo) explaining major cuts or additions so I can track changes Indicate the tools or software you prefer for tracking revisions—Word, Google Docs, or Scrivener are all fine—and include a sample of comparable thriller edits if possible.

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@BusinessGenius24

$0 USD 15 päivässä

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(29 arvostelut)

6,5

33 freelancerit tarjoavat keskimäärin $1 225 USD tätä projektia

@AneesaIBA

Hi there, I’ve carefully reviewed your brief and understand that you’re looking for a transformative edit of your 110k-word women’s-fiction manuscript, turning it into a lean, psychologically tense page-turner. The goal is to tighten the story, remove or streamline subplots, and enhance suspense so it edges into psychological-thriller territory, while preserving your voice, core themes, and seamless dialogue. My approach will involve a full manuscript read-through to identify excess material, pacing issues, and opportunities to heighten tension. I’ll restructure scenes to interweave flashbacks and present-day action for maximum narrative suspense. Plot twists will be sharpened and intensified, while trimming and reallocating material will ensure cohesion. I’ll provide a scene-by-scene outline showing the restructured timeline and flashback placements, along with margin notes or a separate memo explaining major edits. PORTFOLIO: https://www.freelancer.com/u/AneesaIBA?w=f&ngsw-bypass= I typically work in Microsoft Word using Track Changes, but can adapt to Google Docs or Scrivener if preferred. Could you share a few passages that best capture the voice you want preserved? Also, do you want the suspense to be subtle or more pronounced and dark throughout? I can provide a polished, shorter, and psychologically charged manuscript that maintains your story’s heart while keeping readers on edge. Cheers, Rabia Shaikh

$1 500 USD 1 päivässä

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(221 arvostelut)

7,3

@laurajojones

Hello I can assist you in crafting your 110,000-word women’s fiction manuscript into a taut, psychologically tense page-turner. With extensive experience in transforming layered narratives into lean, gripping stories, I will preserve your voice and core themes while heightening suspense and introducing darker, thriller-inflected twists. My approach focuses on restructuring your existing scenes, seamlessly integrating flashbacks with present-day action, tightening dialogue, pacing, and perspective shifts. Subplots will be refined or removed to strengthen the narrative without losing emotional depth, ensuring the manuscript flows effortlessly while maintaining psychological intensity. Deliverables include a fully edited, shorter manuscript, a detailed scene-by-scene outline, and margin notes explaining revisions. I work in Word, Google Docs, or Scrivener and can provide a sample of similar thriller edits upon request. Thanks.

$750 USD 4 päivässä