Hey mate,
I don't write hip hop, but am a fan, I've written one at the bottom of this message
I literally haven't edited it, I'm not new to writing, but I am new to freelancer.com
I would be grateful for the opportunity to work on this in order to build my profile and reviews.
Thanks!
See below:
Creation is Free, Action is Free
If you're struggling in this life it's cos you're struggling to see,
In this world of constant content endorsement,
There are people out there without the money for rent
No we don't agree, we don't consent,
But if we took time to look up, we won't reprise our intent
Make it last louder, longer, and stronger
and make an end to this suffering that day by day gets wronger
We would go for a swim (deep) and see from within
See what breaks them, makes them, and then we could save them
When did humanity build such a conclusion
It's only because our differences are such an illusion
I hope you can see the potential in it, it seems to be more about homeless than old people, often these things take a few edits.
Thanks
Will