This is the video I need you to edit: [login to view URL]
This is a good example of a competitor video: [login to view URL]
Compare with mine, to notice, how much less he speaks..
Essentially his is more to the point it seems rehearsed and also he has clearer audio..
I need you to make my video, like his..
I also need you to speed up the sections, that show a loading screen.. and try to make the video as short as possible, without loosing any info..
I also urge you to be creative and add any effects, that you think will enhance the video