I have already written a statement of 1000 word. But my teacher backs it to me to edit this statement slightly.
1. As, it is a statement of my Management Class, my teacher said to improve it more global management oriented.
2. Proof read and check the grammar (he said the grammar is 90% okay, but check the particular 2 paragraphs carefully, so it’s a 5 minutes task)
That’s all. According to my teacher, it is okay..But need to be improved and the most important thing is it should be more global management oriented.
I have attached the statement herewith, please check and slightly edit it according to my Course program as well as check the grammar please.
I also attached my course Program.
It’s a half an hour task for the right person. So, bid accordingly.