Prepare the 4000-word doc for publishing (a bit of editing, rewriting and proofreading)

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I need an English native speaker with perfect grammar to check my doc for any problems and questionable places and edit them for me. Every questionable place must be discussed with me.

Here is the sample:

"Mostly the older children (“biguns”) gather a giant pile of wood on top, except for Piggy. Ralph and Jack, carrying along the heavy log, feel united with friendship, adventure and content. When it comes to starting a fire, both turn red, realizing that did not think about how to do this. Ralph offers this honor to Jack. Roger proposes to use sticks and lacing. Jack hits upon the idea of using Piggy’s glasses and takes them away. Piggy can barely see without them, so he panics, but Ralph pushes him away, takes the glasses and sets on a huge fire which improves everyone’s mood. Piggy asks for his glasses and Ralph gives them back. Ralph commands the others to gather more wood but then notes that there is almost no smoke. Maurice says that they need green branches for smoke.

Piggy says that the fire is too big but Jack interrupts him roughly, despite the shell in Piggy's hands. Ralph says that it is necessary to follow the rules (“The rule of the shell”), and that they must constantly maintain fire with smoke. Jack suggests that his hunters would be responsible for the fire and look for a ship, having seen which they would throw promptly more green branches on to the fire for it to smoke.

Piggy starts complaining that he provides a lot of ideas, but is being stopped, while everyone listens to others. Suddenly a wildfire starts and Piggy sarcastically blames everybody. At first, everybody is happy with the performance, but then they get scared with the growing size of the fire. Piggy, with the shell in his hands, continues to blame others for their unreasonable behaviors. First of all, he says, they should be thinking about the huts as the nights are cold; no one watches after the smaller children (“littluns”) and they are not counted. Ralph says it was Piggy’s work, but Piggy justifies it with the disorder and unruly children. The littluns scream about the snakes, seeing vines moving in the fire. Piggy notices that the kid with a mark on his face is gone.

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Artikkelin uudelleenkirjoittaminen Editointi Oikoluku

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