Superyacht manufacturers (shipyards) contract out the painting and finishing of superyachts to private companies.(New build or refit projects)
In turn, most of the big superyacht paint applicator companies subcontract smaller companies to complete the work.
Because our company is new to the market, the best possible way for us to succeed is to establish partnerships with these big companies. We can support their company by offering the following;
- Completing their work with our dedicated staff - faster, on time and to the highest quality
- Meeting the manpower requirements
- Completing their contract at a very competitive rate
This letter will be sent to companies we hope to collaborate with, requesting a meeting to discuss the opportunities.
Please check the letter below. It is not professionally written. It needs to be edited and rewritten so that it presents our company, our team and our services in a professional, businesslike way, and gets us the opportunity of meeting and collaborating with our prospective partners.
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Dear Sir or Madam
Allow us to present Intercoating – an international company that specializes in providing surface finishing services for the superyacht industry. We are currently seeking new, mutually beneficial partnerships with the painting contractors in the same field. With our professional workforce and management system your paint projects will be completed in the most appropriate way. We believe that building a strong relationship between our companies will provide you better competitive power in the market.
With a large team of experts from the Western Thrace region of Greece renowned for industrial paint finishing, we are confident that we will provide you with the highest quality, first-class services. Our workforce comprises the most skillful and dedicated artisans in the superyacht sector. They have all worked on the most prestigious superyacht construction projects, in shipyards around the world. Intercoating has developed and perfected innovative fairing techniques and painting systems that allow us to ensure that all projects are completed on time, on budget and to the highest standards.
We eagerly look forward to the opportunity of meeting you at your earliest convenience to explore ways in which our two companies can create a fruitful and long-lasting partnership. In the meantime, we have taken the liberty of enclosing our latest brochure so that you can further evaluate our competences at your leisure.
We look forward to hearing from you and, hopefully, meeting you in the very near future.
Yours sincerely,
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Hello, my name is Shadi Habib and i'm currently domained in Venezuela. I read the letter and I agree with you in regards of it's unprofessional look, if I were the CEO of a major Superyacht painting company I wouldn't establish partnership with a small superyacht painting company that withholds such a content-less (and excuse me for the harsh use of words here) message like that. I will be able to proofread and edit it if you provide me the following additional information:
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