40k Visual Arts Thesis Editing/Proofreading

Hi There,

I'm about to submit my thesis which was already edited by someone else but my supervisor was not happy with the editing and so I need to fix it urgently.

This means that if you get the project you will receive it Friday 9am (Australian Eastern Time) and need to complete project in 3 days 9am Monday (Australian Eastern Time).

Here is my supervisors comments to give an idea of work needed to be done:

I have been through the whole thing…. the first 7000 words or so were still a mess and i have done what i can to clarify them.

1. Key things you need to fix up overall

a. decide what you are doing with Italics for groups publications etc and stick to the convention through the whole thesis

b. a lot of the sentences are too long and go nowhere. You need for read every line, and cut back sentences to crisp, short content, and paragraphs so they deal with one broad idea.

c. bibliography needs to be consistent

d. Put a contents list at the front of thesis to display the chapters and their key elements. Each chapter should also have a guide list at the beginning.

e. decide single or double quotes and stick to it.

2. The later part works better than the earlier part which is still a mess. You need tot tighten the pathway. The different approaches are great abut it is still not really clear that these are "failed" experiments form which you have learned.

3. The conclusion/end needs to be more carefully framed so that it is clear i) what you have found ii) what this means in terms of changing content etc; and iii) what re the implications for participative action in the ernw Abbott age.

Please only bid if you are from Australia/NZ/UK/USA and are able to deliver absolutely on time

Many thanks,


Taidot: artikkelien uudelleenkirjoittaminen, Oikoluku, Tutkimusten kirjoitus

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