Write my Product Descriptions
- Tila: Closed
- Palkinto: $50
- Vastaanotetut työt: 4
- Voittaja: trixiaobdamen
We are shooting a video with English background narration, I wrote my own version but need someone to calibrate the wording,the video is about introducing a new packaging carton to the market especially online sellers,very simple script, I only need you to polish the wording, make it more attractive, simple and understandable, keep the structure basically the same as I [login to view URL] can take a look at website for a better understanding: [login to view URL]
Following is the draft script:--------------
[Narration Voice, calibrate starts from below:]
1. When your customers receive your product, are they annoyed by the fully wrapped packages? (bad shopping experience)
2. They are fully wrapped up with adhesive tapes which makes it so difficult to open;
3. They need knife or scissors to open which are time-consuming and dangerous;
4. Also, the package is not tamper-evident.
5. Plus, your logo get covered, your customers will never have the chance to see your logo.
1. VProPackaging’s new carton box with ‘zipper‘, can make sure your customers have a totally different experience when dealing with packages;
2. Easy to seal, wrap, and it only takes one second to open the package
3. You can easily open the box with bare hands, no more need scissors or knife
4. It is also tamper-evident, any unauthorized access will be detected
5. Your logo will be fully displayed,
VProPackaging offers a full range of packaging solutions from carton box, folding cartons to plastic boxes, all our carton boxes material, shape and printing can be customized.
For more information please visit our website: [login to view URL]
[Narration Voice, calibrate ends here:]
Wording must be beautified, polished, simple to [login to view URL] include all 3 parts, structure is already given by me.
“Act fast, obviously spend sometime thinking carefully of what I asked. Will hire again.”