Julkinen selvennystaulu
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Kilpailun järjestäjä - 10 vuotta sitten
This is nearly perfect! Maybe it is perfect in concept, as to where to put the P and f, and how they interact. I wonder if the P and f could be made a *little* more visible, perhaps based on their thickness and gapping from the fleur's curls?
A couple of other suggestions:
- The "bulbs" on the end of the fleur curls and the other ornate parts of the letters are too pronounced. If you look at the "fleur de lys with Pf" that I uploaded, you'll see the bottom of the curls have smaller bulbs.
- I'm not sure about the bottom of the central fleur stalk being a diamon, as the rest of the design is rounder
- Ideally, the curls of the fleur would align perfectly with the inner stalk (i.e. the gap between them would be a constant thickness, so they'd follow the same curve)
Would you be able to do another version with those revisions?- 10 vuotta sitten
