Rewrite a single, short Article for me

Tila: Closed
Palkinto: $50
Vastaanotetut työt: 35
Voittaja: FluentImpact

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The purpose of this article is to have a short history on the founder of a company and how it company formed.

The rough, poorly-written story is attached in a word file. You are to re-write it and alter it in the following ways:

1: Change it from first person to third person.
2: Clean up the prose and make exciting and interesting to read. I would like to feel like I am reading about the Dos Equis guy/most interesting man in the world without being comical.

I will award the contest to whoever's I like the best, there might be some changes after you win.

I'd probably try to keep it between 600-800 words (it is 629 now) but there is no hard rule.

Good luck!

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lzuccari
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Congratulations, fluentimpact!
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andyabes
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Hi Darren, if possible I would really appreciate some feedback on my entry. Thank you for your consideration.
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writersquality
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Please gibe feedback for entry #34 .
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1. writersquality
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  Please give suggestions so that I could improve my previous submission i.e. entry #34 .
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writersquality
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Please wait for my entry. I shall submit it tomorrow.
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moinul23
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Please check entry 19. Thanks
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hotline69
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Please wait 4 hours. Thanks
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1. AliMalik01
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  Hmm what is the method to work here..?
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2. kavita1211
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  when I complete writing the story, how do I upload it? in what form?
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hasanmian
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Hello. I am an MBA from reputed university and writing articles, doing rewriting stuff, essay writing for the last 01 year. My work will be 100% free from plagiarism and from grammatical errors and mistakes. On time delivery will be first priority. I will try my level best to provide quality work and reach up to the expectation level.

Available at economical rate. Looking for a long term relationship.

Thanks and regards,
Hasan
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utcaydua
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Give me your story, please
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catsamore
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Never mind. I converted it to a jpeg!
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catsamore
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How do I actually submit a file that is not an image?
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Kilpailun järjestäjä
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I have uploaded a simple text version of the document. If anyone has problems downloading it now, please let me know.
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gauravbahuguna79
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It shows error while downloading the file.
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jandm119
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I'd like to submit my entry on this, I would definitely be able to provide work precisely as you have instructed, but I am unable to open the attachment on my computer. I am unable to view it and I'd reallllly like to give this a shot! Is there any way you could provide another version of the attachment that may be compatible with my programs, they are slightly outdated :(
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