Review and edit 1 SOP and 3 LORs using advanced English and writing assistant software.

  • Tila: Closed
  • Palkinto: ₹500
  • Vastaanotetut työt: 13
  • Voittaja: msaurabh9807

Kilpailun tehtävänanto

I have written an SOP and 3 LORs for my Master's degree. Now I want to get them edited with an advanced level of English so that they seem appealing to the Universities. A well-experienced person who has already written SOPs and LORs for students will definitely have an idea of it and may edit them accordingly. I have mentioned all the content I could gather. Now it's your turn.

Note: Please mention the writing assistant software you'll be using while editing, in your bids.

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  • JatinKarela27
    JatinKarela27
    • 2 kuukautta sitten

    I am really sorry for my mistake that I forgot to make mention of the software. Is it fine if I do so here? It is quillbot I used to get some beautiful words in LOR1.

    • 2 kuukautta sitten
  • JatinKarela27
    JatinKarela27
    • 2 kuukautta sitten

    Sir, i wanted to ask that we are supposed to edit all 3 LORs with SOP or only one of them for now. So you can choose one of us to work on all the remaining three documents?

    • 2 kuukautta sitten
    1. VermaDharamveer
      Kilpailun järjestäjä
      • 2 kuukautta sitten

      You may bid by submitting any of the 4 for my assurance of quality.

      • 2 kuukautta sitten
  • WeaselWorks
    WeaselWorks
    • 2 kuukautta sitten

    Part 2 of 2.

    8. "This test involves a comprehensive understanding in engineering..." = "These test results reflect a comprehensive understanding of engineering..."
    9. Last line of 2nd paragraph should read "He consistently demonstrates the analytical skills to solve problems, he is enthusiastic and remains attentive, and he strives to perform well and improve himself.

    The #9 edit alone strengthens the message with dynamic word choice, brings clarity by reiterating the subject, improves cadence, uses proper list mechanics, and corrects a misplaced comma.

    I think you deserve more. Please contact me.

    • 2 kuukautta sitten
    1. VermaDharamveer
      Kilpailun järjestäjä
      • 2 kuukautta sitten

      You can proceed by bidding in the contest.

      • 2 kuukautta sitten
  • WeaselWorks
    WeaselWorks
    • 2 kuukautta sitten

    Part 1 of 2.

    No editing software is necessary to create dynamic, error-free copy when good editing is employed. Here are my corrections of just the first two paragraphs of the winning entry submission.

    1. Comma after Energy Studies (third line) should be a period.
    2. "graduate year which included" = "graduate year, including"
    3. "and had also been" doesn’t make any sense; the subject of the verb is unclear.
    4. "courses such as" = "courses, such as"
    5. "Seminar" looks like a mistake. Which Seminar?
    6. You don't "secure 86.1%." Use stronger verb and define the figure: "...achieve a completion rate of 86.1%..." or "...maintain an 86.1% rate of accuracy..." etc.
    7. He “qualified for the Graduate Aptitude Test” or "achieved a qualifying score on the Graduate Aptitude Test"?

    • 2 kuukautta sitten

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