Reunite a Son

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Write a persuasive letter for the purposes of reuniting a Son to his Father.
Dear Son,

Tom, greetings from your father. Now that the court’s no longer involved in whether we communicate it is a good time to write to you to let you know how I feel. Ultimately, I am going to keep this short I am just sending this letter so you know that I would like us to be in communication with each other, especially now that each of our family members mortality is a bit more uncertain. I have been working as an cook in Washington, D.C. and Texas. Though these are desperate times, I feel blessed living in the 2020’s, and I am hoping this to be one of the best years of my life. One thing that I have learned and relearned in life is how important family and friends are to each and everyone of us on this crazy planet. As far as your educational and career path I hope you will consider the wisdom of your great grandfather bob . He always said, “You will usually make more money if you work for yourself or own property than if you’re just an employee.” However, sometimes there are exceptions, you used to always talk about working for Lego. So if thats your dream sometimes you just have to go for your dream as well.

Your Uncle Kyle has lymphoma, also diabetes and is not at his healthiest. He misses you too and I’m sure he would love to hear from you sometime. If you're curious about him or what he has to say, now is the time for his nieces and nephews, as his health is fragile and he is not expected to survive to his normally expected cohort life expectancy. There are many Smith family stories you may not have heard but in part are your story as much as your DNA. His number is (415) xxxx. Finally, as a High School teacher I was taught the concept of noblesse oblige. To me it means the more you have been blessed with. the more responsibility you have to others in your family and society. You also have a greater responsibility as you are my first born and eldest son. So I have included my contact information. I can give you a hollar if you want to send me your phone number by email or letter. I started this letter last year and circumstances have changed to an emergency level. That is why I am in Dallas, to do what I need do for you or your siblings. Just know I love and miss you and welcome you any time.

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  • sometimeforu
    sometimeforu
    • 1 vuosi sitten

    The contest is over, and we all see it as a common practice to wait for results for up to four weeks but here in this case, I am holding breath to see, what wins your heart as the initial desired content writing instructions added with later board explanations made it more interesting to look for the result. Can you please find a time to see what appeals you and which entry is winner. Hope you don't get angry as the wait for such a passionate writing is at the highest to see what convinces you to decide... Results awaited, whoever wins but the aim of every writer must have been to write it with emotions, filled along with narrative as you desired with some imaginary scenes.... thank you

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  • teewanlin
    teewanlin
    • 1 vuosi sitten

    After 4 weeks of contest and 1 day to award, I say thank you for the grading (stars) so far and that I hope you will choose my letter. My innocence in interception will hopefully help bless your relationship between son-and-father. Speak to God!

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  • Affiliatemarke
    Affiliatemarke
    • 1 vuosi sitten

    Hey Father Tom, I don't know if you would believe this I once had issues with my father, but we did reunite, but he was in prison so we couldn't really meet but I still have a talk with him , I don't want you and your son to have any problem, so I am gonna write you a perfect letter, hire me sir?

    • 1 vuosi sitten
    1. UmeAnimals
      Kilpailun järjestäjä
      • 1 vuosi sitten

      See response to Alfat, below.

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    2. UmeAnimals
      Kilpailun järjestäjä
      • 1 vuosi sitten

      just FYI. One.letter really showed.that I failed.to include an important point. That of raising the issue of the childs own perspective and acknowledging that he may have his own hurt and personal feelings about all this. The creativity of this letter is what im.looking for. please add more. you brought out that he has his own story to tell INCLUDING TO LISTEN YOUR YEARS PASSED. This brings a new arguement up or issue, the importance of what the kid went through its essential in order to show empathy for how he himself.might feel damaged by both sides.

      • 1 vuosi sitten
  • Alfatzeetu
    Alfatzeetu
    • 1 vuosi sitten

    i can do it

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    1. UmeAnimals
      Kilpailun järjestäjä
      • 1 vuosi sitten

      It's a contest so your invited to enter with words.

      • 1 vuosi sitten
  • gerardolamus
    gerardolamus
    • 1 vuosi sitten

    Hello ... and do you need this letter with a kind of design ? I would record the letter and do a video for you and send it to you son in youtube !!! or whatsapp .... just suggest !! regards

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    1. UmeAnimals
      Kilpailun järjestäjä
      • 1 vuosi sitten

      1st email then multimedia in a couple of weeks. I'll try anything that works. What would you scream if he was stopped at a red light, his Mom driving and it's about to turn green and you may never have a second chance. What words?

      • 1 vuosi sitten
  • anthony2020
    anthony2020
    • 1 vuosi sitten

    Hi, can you explain what you need with the letter you wrote? thanks

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    1. UmeAnimals
      Kilpailun järjestäjä
      • 1 vuosi sitten

      The need is an attempt to make 1st contact after about 7 years of Zero contact. with my son before the chance, though small, that I die from.Covid-19 or any other cause before I see any of my children again.

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  • UmeAnimals
    Kilpailun järjestäjä
    • 1 vuosi sitten

    The kid also knows most of the narratives and characters of the Star Wars franchise. He might like legos and star wars legos a rank.level above that. He lives with an overprotective Mother and maternal Grandmother. He is skinny and has been a part of a Christian born again culture all his life. I would say his human needs are maybe to be seen as the expert as opposed to seeing himself as a victim in life. He is somewhat creative and the oldest of 4 siblings.

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    1. teewanlin
      teewanlin
      • 1 vuosi sitten

      You must care about the child very much. You can always let me know your comments regarding my submitted letter and I can make the amendments for you. My first bf at seventeen was a Star War fan.

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    2. UmeAnimals
      Kilpailun järjestäjä
      • 1 vuosi sitten

      I've cried all I can, I'm out of tears and the mother has had the courts prevent me from seeing them or even so.much as a phone call for over 7 years. She is a divorce attorney. Now he is 19 and can do what he wants. If this fails I'll try again in a couple of months. Then his brother will be 18 and I'll start the whole process individually with him
      . Thank you for your sympathy. I am a good father and have 0 criminal convictions

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  • dhanrajmane586
    dhanrajmane586
    • 1 vuosi sitten

    can you please elaborate on your requirements?

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    1. UmeAnimals
      Kilpailun järjestäjä
      • 1 vuosi sitten

      I dont dispute that, however a high school level technicals vs doctorate level is not going to matter 2 cents, no? Here is a story he wrote before the age of 8, maybe I could bring up nostalgic feelings by alluding to it quoting it?



      Hunt
      A Short Story

      I am a unicorn. This is my story. My Mother is a white unicorn,my Father is a magnificent brown unicorn who leads our band. We live in a forest in England. Now to the story. I shall start when I was a colt.

      “Hey! Star! Wake up! Let's go to the Grandfather Tree. The rest of the colts are waiting to race, and after that we are going to eat some apples,”said

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    2. UmeAnimals
      Kilpailun järjestäjä
      • 1 vuosi sitten

      Here is a link to a story he wrote as a child under 8. Maybe alluding to it or quoting it could create some emotional action or raise important nostalgic feelings. https://docs.google.com/document/d/11FlBcc2tmqZygpQ7vCICLTWAAdKKrINhvOQMonKOVeo/edit?usp=drivesdk

      • 1 vuosi sitten

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