Logo for Touring Company

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Palkinto: $70
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Voittaja: Vpfaff

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Project Description:
I want to design a logo for my touring company.
We do tours in Israel, which are meaningful and inspiring.

I want it to be clean and elegant.

I should represent what our company is about:
Tours in Israel
people moved by what they see
inspiring sites
people enjoying the people around them
open heart
fun
good time
good memories
exciting
beauty
classy
service
modern

I attached a draft of what I have in mind.
the wall is the wall of Jerusalem

I attached some pics of the wall of Jerusalem to get the idea.
the two shaded people are inspired by what they see, but they are also friends.
it's not a romantic image, it's a friendship image

the sun can be this size, bigger or smaller.

the sun should also remind of the Jerusalem famous dome of the rock. I attached a picture of that too.

I would like to have the illustrator (or whatever program that's used) file, including the layers separation.

If I get relevant suggestions I will raise and grantee the price before we move on with it.

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Kilpailun järjestäjä
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Thank you everyone of your great work. Looking forward to working with you guys in the future.
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Kilpailun järjestäjä
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#40
Thank you
What I meant is to leave the white wall with the 4 rectangle shapes on the top, and the dome/sun, and without the blue part.
we can try with a line that defines the top of the wall (brown?) or just without.
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1. Vpfaff
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  Hello, it's a simple thing, i'v made a logotype ( i work hard, and spend hours like you ! )
  and now, we are working together to make it simply better, if you have a great design, then you can also work with the client to get closer to his needs.. it's just obvious, i don't see why it isn't fair, let the best win the entry...
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2. Kilpailun järjestäjä
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  Every one can read the indications, they are not privet.
  Thank you very much for your work, Its beautiful, and I did feedback it, but it's not exactly what I needed.
  It says in the brief - minimal, elegant, shows light, perhaps inspiration and friendship.. Vpfaff was closer with his offers to the companies need. You have great work and I have many projects. I'm sure that if not this time, in the future we'll work together.
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Kilpailun järjestäjä
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between #40 the one on the left, and #49 the one on the left. it's hard to decide..
I loved that you notices this nuance in the shape of the dome, that it can be round like a sun or have more the dome of the rock shape.
I wounder which one is better for marketing and products and stuff..
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Vpfaff
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#13
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1. Kilpailun järjestäjä
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  Hello,
  I am interested t know, how would the logo look like if it's more simple. Like if we leave just the dome and the sun ray, and the wall. no people, no words, and no gateways.
  What do you think, a logo like that will be easier to work with and easier to brand our service?
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2. Vpfaff
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  #40
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ap051
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i mean hello
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ap051
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hell
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Kilpailun järjestäjä
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thanks a lot,
It isn't really what I'm looking for -
too many colors, too complicated, too religious.
the logo should show the insight, inspiration, refreshment, friendship, old-new combination.
It should be solid, clean, 1-2 colors, young, cool...
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Kilpailun järjestäjä
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#3
I like the clean elegant look.
things that I'm missing in this draft:
- friendship
- People looking inspired (like those looking at the sunrise on my draft)
- In and Site different colors
- the sunrise or something else expressing the inspiration and beauty
- modern look
Is it's possible to add and element to have this - this might be it.
How about adding sun rays to the dome so it can be ether a dome or a sunrise?
or add a path going into the gate?
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1. Kilpailun järjestäjä
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  I'm thinking maybe a stronger color. maybe orange gold
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2. Kilpailun järjestäjä
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  and maybe blue instead of brown will make it lighter, and remind of Israeli flag colors
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tamrin05
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I apologise it isnt a boat in the last one i uploaded its clearer. What sort of friendship are you looking for
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1. Kilpailun järjestäjä
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  thanks
  I tend to like a logo that is a siple shape, 1-2 colors, well defined.
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2. Kilpailun järjestäjä
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  *simple
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Kilpailun järjestäjä
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#8 looks great, I like a lot the continuous affect.
How about a round gateway, and square shape of the top of the wall. and add the inspired people looking towards the sunrise.
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1. mix717
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  #11 please review
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2. Kilpailun järjestäjä
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  I mean the top of the wall where there is a rectangle space between bricks on the top row
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Vpfaff
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#12 please do you own creation, it's just disrespectful ... I spend a lot of time when i do my logotype's creation... please do the same and show some respect for my work
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Kilpailun järjestäjä
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#9 I like a lot. I wonder how it wuold look like with different shapes of peoples shadows. Or/and a path into the gate.
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1. Vpfaff
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  allright,i will try several propositions tomorrow...
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tamrin05
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I attempted something different, let me know what you think
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1. Kilpailun järjestäjä
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  Thank you
  This one is a little unclear, especially on small print.
  The boat doesn't belong,
  the two people should have massage of friendship and inspiration.
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tamrin05
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Hi let me know if I am on the right track and what you would like more of in the logo
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1. Kilpailun järjestäjä
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  Hi,
  Thanks for your suggestion. It looks very nice. I'm looking for something that will have the elements that were in the draft that I posted- like The shape of the top of the wall.
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2. Kilpailun järjestäjä
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  Also the difference between the In-Site should be clear
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