Illustrate a simple retail store floor plan

Tila: Closed
Palkinto: €180
Vastaanotetut työt: 32
Voittaja: ushuaia

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I need a simple (without that many details) illustration of a retail store floor plan.
Inspired by the attached image named retail.

I need a somewhat similar illustration done, to explain a similar concept.
Please see attached photo named "foto.jpg" for a sketch of what I want.

Basically it’s a retail store with five “areas”:
1. Entry
2. Display of t-shirts
3. Display of shoes
4. Cashier
5. Exit

For every area there should be a “signal” marked on the ground, illustrating that the area is covered by a Bluetooth signal (don’t need to show a Bluetooth logo)

The illustration should show the “shopping experience” of a little man, with a phone in his hand. Arrows indicate how he moves through the store, and the text bullets should explain what happens.

The placement of the man and the different areas in the store is just my initial idea, you are most welcome to do it different in your suggestion.

Text for the different areas:
Entry: Attract shoppers walking by, by triggering notifications on their phone
T-shirts: Provide in-store service, e.g. show list of most popular t-shirts
Shoes: Provide in-store service, e.g. show available sizes of shoes on display
Cashier: Easily let users sign up to your loyalty program, while they are waiting
Exit: Trigger thank you notification when leaving, and provide incentive to come back

I language is going to be Danish, so I will provide Danish translation for the text above for you to insert when finished (or I can add myself when you provide the file)

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“Thank you ushuaia, you did a good job here. Hope to use you for more illustrations :)”

wickings, Denmark.

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notnowjohn
- 11 vuotta sitten
Dear, Wickings, I can't see the attached files. Can you make them available fro me somehow? Thank you.
- 11 vuotta sitten
Näytä 1 viesti lisää
1. Kilpailun järjestäjä
  - 11 vuotta sitten
  Cant seem to send directly until you submit something
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2. Kilpailun järjestäjä
  - 11 vuotta sitten
  They are there, look under the project details
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Kilpailun järjestäjä
- 11 vuotta sitten
I will another review for all. Nice with a flat design suggestion, I like this. One thing I relalized. This is to be shown on a website.. e.g. in the resolution 700x300 pixels.. this might mean less details needed. It should simply be easy to understand that there are five areas: entry, t-shirt, sho, cashier and exit.. and that these have a beacon zone. I therefor also think the textboxes with text in, is a no go - as the text will become too small. Its better to mark each area with a number, and then I can have explainer text below the picture
- 11 vuotta sitten
1. ArqJM
  - 11 vuotta sitten
  the ratio of the image must be 700x300 or may be a little higher and less long?
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2. Kilpailun järjestäjä
  - 11 vuotta sitten
  No problem if a little off
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adityasrinate
- 11 vuotta sitten
any feedback on my entry so I can get 5 stars like the others!
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ArqJM
- 11 vuotta sitten
please check #27 and feedback to improve it about your suggestions... Thank you!
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Kilpailun järjestäjä
- 11 vuotta sitten
All. I have added new individual feedback to all. Can you see this OK=
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ArqJM
- 11 vuotta sitten
please check and feedback #16 and #17 ... thanks!
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hantig
- 12 vuotta sitten
feedback will help a lot in this stage, Thanks!
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1. Kilpailun järjestäjä
  - 11 vuotta sitten
  Would suggest the following:
  - simplify it, by removing the different text boxes in colors. I think we can simply indicate each area with a number (1,2,3,4,5) and then add description of each number in bottom right corner?
  - remove the "low" tshirt display, only one is needed to understand
  - remove the sho display on the "back side" of the tshirt wall, cant see what it is.. better to leave it out
  - do you have a character of a younger guy/girl instead of this grey-haired man? :)
  - Could you make "Entry" say "Indgang" and "Cashier" say "Kassen"?
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2. originalov
  - 11 vuotta sitten
  uf i just now see the brief updates. well i will try with new suggestions.
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Kilpailun järjestäjä
- 11 vuotta sitten
Feedback has been provided to all
- 11 vuotta sitten
Katso 6 viestiä lisää
1. ushuaia
  - 11 vuotta sitten
  I have the same problem
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2. ushuaia
  - 11 vuotta sitten
  I have the same problem about reading your message :)
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hantig
- 12 vuotta sitten
i will make this in 3d. Hope you will like it
- 12 vuotta sitten
1. Kilpailun järjestäjä
  - 12 vuotta sitten
  Look forward to seeing it :)
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