Graphic Design for edition offenburg

Julkinen selvennystaulu

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  Guxalin

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  Thank you so much!!

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  Kilpailun järjestäjä

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  Thanks a lot to everyone who participated!

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     neutron88

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     Can any till me how to pass "Freelancer Orientation Test " :)

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     nabeelkondotty

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     just one suggestion, Please add the fallen "e" "o" leaves under the tree at the bottom.
     
     regards,
     Nabeel

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  nabeelkondotty

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  @Guxalin , Congrats and keep going.
  all the best
  
  regards,
  Nabeel

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  Guxalin

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  Please check #12 and #13 Thank you.

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     PPG9773

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     It's not often clear that there are pms via our dashboard - so maybe they simply haven't found them. Guxalin - in your competitions dashboard look to the drop down menu and click on 'message' - you will find your private mesage board there. HTH. PS personally the notes look a little twee - try abstracting them a little.

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     nabeelkondotty

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     Anyway Guxalin... Congratz

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  zhall

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  pls check #47 , #48 , #49 , #50 sir..i hope you like it

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     zhall

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     and #51 ;)

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  nabeelkondotty

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  Hello sir,
  Please kindly check my entries #22 - #28 . I have arranged the texts to be appearing in that small size. Nothing to talk more. Just see each one to feel the change between. The text alignment/size/arrangement.
  
  Thanks

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     nabeelkondotty

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     Will do it

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     nabeelkondotty

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     Border can be added to the one which you need. Thanks for your feedback. border color and thickness you can decide.
     I use this style to keep the uniformity of your all works. And your work style should be followed always :)
     
     Thanks

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  nabeelkondotty

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  + #36 , #37
  
  Please kindly rate

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  nabeelkondotty

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  Ready for Editting

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  neutron88

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  quality reduced due to conversion to a pic but i guess you would get the idea.

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     neutron88

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     Thanks for advice you pretty lady :)

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     PPG9773

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     LOL - perhaps 20 years ago.

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  PPG9773

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  Ok so it's not conservative - but in a conservative magazine a little 'difference' may cause a lot of looks!

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     Kilpailun järjestäjä

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     I agree, a little difference shouldn't be a show stopper. But to be honest #11 looks too bold and a bit tangled to me. Too many different effects like the tilted and the 3D logo, many different font sizes and weights...

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     PPG9773

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     Ok - I'll simplify. Thank you for taking the time to give feedback - it is most appreciated and a courtesy not often extended in these competitions.

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  Kilpailun järjestäjä

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  in general, for the entries with a lot of white: I would prefer a border around the ad since its just a quarter page

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  ArtsBrand

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  Thanks for checking my entries; is there anything you'd like me to do to improve them further?

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  nabeelkondotty

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  #29
  with
  some more touches

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  nabeelkondotty

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  My Entries : #22 , #23 , #24 , #25 , #26 , #27 , #28
  Please have a glance through each one You will find the one you need. Please kindly rate these.
  
  Thanks

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  ArtsBrand

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  Hi Jul 405, do you want 'The Art of Playing on the Violin' to be italicised? Feels wrong for it not to be - I'm a cellist and a perfectionist!

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  azkaik

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  check the tree logo #8 ..how is that?

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  Kilpailun järjestäjä

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  I've added the tree logo as a vector

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  azkaik

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  #5 is the edition offenburg in one line...:)

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     Kilpailun järjestäjä

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     hi azkaik, as for #4 and #5 ... i don't know, the vector doesn't really fit. But maybe you could play with the tree logo? I just noticed I didn't upload a vector version - will be there in a couple of minutes

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  azkaik

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  hey check #4 i have added a vector and changed the style,,i think a little design will attract for people and make the add attractive ..tell me if you want it removed..:)

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  azkaik

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  i have used the ariel font and mentioned all what u said and did'nt added any vector etc.if you want to add details or change the font then tell me soon..:)

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     Kilpailun järjestäjä

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     yes, the font is fine. I think i would prefer to have "edition offenburg" (it's with a u by the way) in one line though. If you have good ideas to make the ad look better with vectors feel free to do so...

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     azkaik

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     sure i'm making my effort hope u like :)

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  azkaik

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  would you like to tell something about #1 .any improvement or text alternation??

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  Kilpailun järjestäjä

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  Thanks for the entries so far. Please note that the sketch doesn't have to be followed by no means - I've (tried) to put all the requirements in the brief itself. Full address can, but doesn't have to be included (just the URL is necessary).

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