Banner Guru Entry
Hello, I have completed the job partially. Still few frames remaining to complete. If you like my idea I will finish rest of things this way. Preview link: http://banner-guru.com/contest/dutch/ Waiting for your feedback. Thanks Abdur Rahim
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BannerGuru
- 9 vuotta sitten
Dear Dave,
Still I am working on your banner :)
Hope soon you will see the flash banner.
Thanks- 9 vuotta sitten
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Kilpailun järjestäjä - 9 vuotta sitten
Hi Abdur, looking forward to your entry!
Regards, David- 9 vuotta sitten
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BannerGuru
- 9 vuotta sitten
Dear David,
Thanks for your positive feedback.
Actually different language was the issue :)
But your feedabck helped me lot of soon I will submit my new entry with 100% complete. Hope you must like that.
Thanks
Abdur Rahim- 9 vuotta sitten
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Kilpailun järjestäjä - 9 vuotta sitten
Hi Thanks for your entry, it seems the most promising one ;-)
To begin with; we buy games, and that only comes back in the 3rd slide.
The graphics for the console you used are joypads, or a handheld. But we don't buy hardware, so that's a bit confusing I think.
You could solve it buy running some packshots of Playstation 3, Xbox 360 and Nintendo Wii U games fast forward along (should be fast, we don't want to infringe copyright too much), or in a stack, or the correct logo's of the consoles.
The word 'meerdere' is a little lost. 'meerdere' is the adjective of 'games', like multiple games.
Roughly translated it says 'sell multiple' which doesn't make any sense without games.
To solve that you could replace 'verkoop meerdere' with 'verkoop je' (sell your) and put the word games somewhere else, or make sure people understand it is about games within the context.
So, do I make any sense? I hope so, because I like the visuals so far!
Sincere, David- 9 vuotta sitten
