Content Writing for Medical Office Brochure

  • Tila: Closed
  • Palkinto: $50
  • Vastaanotetut työt: 19
  • Voittaja: gailwesterfield

Kilpailun tehtävänanto

I will provide a version of the text I want on a brochure about medical office services.
We want the text modified for clarity, grammar and most important to make clients want to buy the services.
Thank you

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  • gailwesterfield
    gailwesterfield
    • 4 years ago

    Hi! You sent me a message about further work, but I can't find it anywhere on my messages, nor can I figure out how to communicate with you! Could you resend it through the Freelancer PM?

    • 4 years ago
  • stranger0090
    stranger0090
    • 4 years ago

    Hello. Still waiting for the result :) have you selected?

    • 4 years ago
  • stranger0090
    stranger0090
    • 4 years ago

    Have you seen all the entries? Mine is #2. I did it and hopefully you will like my work. Thanks

    • 4 years ago
  • lzuccari
    lzuccari
    • 4 years ago

    One issue for me was the fact that this will come from a medical office, and must inspire confidence in the reader. It needs to engage the reader and make them want to enroll in one of your plans, BUT it is essential that its tone is professional and medically reliable. If it reads like an infomercial, it is going to turn people off and make you sound like a huckster, instead of a medical professional who provides expert, clinically proven treatment as well as providing an extra measure of service, something that appeals to the patient's desire to be his/her own advocate. It's a bit tricky, not like writing copy to sell the latest "miraculous" diet supplement. That is why I chose to appeal to the patient's desire to be a "partner" with his doctor, still receiving reliable medical management of his health while maintaining an active role in his own regimen. Thanks for your input.

    • 4 years ago
  • calinvpop
    Kilpailun järjestäjä
    • 4 years ago

    Some are ok though

    • 4 years ago
  • calinvpop
    Kilpailun järjestäjä
    • 4 years ago

    I am looking at all of them. The problem is that I wanted to make things easy for me and choose the best one. For me to constantly give feedback and correct every one of 28 entries is a chore I am not willing to get into as it takes too much effort and the point was to make my life easier. Some are better some are not and will likely choose one soon, however I feel too many editors just changed the grammar and style and have been doing a poor copywriting job. In other words the text is correct but dull, and boring to read.

    • 4 years ago
  • SmaSimSolutions
    SmaSimSolutions
    • 4 years ago

    hi calinvpop, please take a look at entry #27 .

    • 4 years ago
  • lzuccari
    lzuccari
    • 4 years ago

    So, do I understand you to say that none of these entries are satisfactory for your purposes?

    • 4 years ago
  • calinvpop
    Kilpailun järjestäjä
    • 4 years ago

    Let me be very clear here! This was a contest for COPYWRITERS, not for editors, proofreaders, freelancers, etc. The purpose is to be able to captivate, attract clients and make them ready to buy.
    Good wording and grammar are a good start but absolutely not enough.

    • 4 years ago
  • ezzhoda
    ezzhoda
    • 4 years ago

    Hello,

    I am really interested in the job. I've been working as a freelancer for over 5 years now and have done previous similar projects. Let me know when I can start.
    Looking forward to your reply :)


    Thanks,

    Hoda

    • 4 years ago
  • SmaSimSolutions
    SmaSimSolutions
    • 4 years ago

    Hello, kindly review entry #27
    I have reduced the word count by 50 words, in order to fit into 1 page brochure. current word count is 450 from the original 500 odd words.i have used positive tone to present the content in users perspective. standard ezine guidelines were followed while working on this article. for any modifications, send me a private message. feel free to see my past work, 5 star rated award winning article on finance. https://www.freelancer.in/contest/Write-a-blog-on-finance-48978-byentry-2143729.html
    https://www.freelancer.in/contest/Write-a-blog-on-finance-48978-byentry-2143752.html

    • 4 years ago
  • pebblessantos
    pebblessantos
    • 4 years ago

    Why can't I submit my entry?

    • 4 years ago
  • rishini
    rishini
    • 4 years ago

    can you provide us with more information about the services provided by these health care packages. The information provided in the article is very vague and not enough to arouse the interest of the reader and actually convince them to buy the product. So let us know, what is offered by each package?, what is the difference between these packages? and why should we buy it?

    • 4 years ago
  • stranger0090
    stranger0090
    • 4 years ago

    Greetings, I am waiting for your decision. I have submitted the edited file. Thanks

    • 4 years ago
  • stranger0090
    stranger0090
    • 4 years ago

    Waiting for your verdict. Thanks

    • 4 years ago
  • lzuccari
    lzuccari
    • 4 years ago

    Done and submitted. Good luck finding your winner!!

    • 4 years ago
  • cattaaa
    cattaaa
    • 4 years ago

    I should have a version available within 24 - 36 hours.

    • 4 years ago
  • stranger0090
    stranger0090
    • 4 years ago

    Document Submitted. Waiting for your decision now. Thanks

    • 4 years ago
  • lzuccari
    lzuccari
    • 4 years ago

    Just saw your contest and this is my speciality. I will post an entry tomorrow. Thanks, Luanne

    • 4 years ago
  • doru1961
    doru1961
    • 4 years ago

    Can I bid for this project?

    • 4 years ago
  • stranger0090
    stranger0090
    • 4 years ago

    I am working on the doc. now. Thanks

    • 4 years ago

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