All you need strapline

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  • Palkinto: £40
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  • Voittaja: kidsstorywriter

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I'm looking for a strapline to describe that we sell 1000s of products to portray the message that we're a one-stop shop for everything that you could possibly need in a business.

'everything you need for your workplace in one place'

The strapline needs to be only a few words.

Our company sells everything from office furniture, ladders, truck & trolley to catering equipment, cupboards and lockers and catering equipment.

Our company website is [login to view URL] if you'd like see see more about what we can offer our customers.

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  • Pepsibo1982
    Kilpailun järjestäjä
    • 2 vuotta sitten

    The ones I have rejected have been for following reasons
    - they concentrate on office supplies, this is only a small part of our business and we sell industrial products.
    - the language/grammar wasn't quite right

    • 2 vuotta sitten
    1. aaronlowcy
      aaronlowcy
      • 2 vuotta sitten

      Are you looking to award runner-up entries too?

      • 2 vuotta sitten
    2. DeepakBalana38
      DeepakBalana38
      • 2 vuotta sitten

      Strap Line of one of the worlds biggest company "McDonald's: "I'm Lovin' It , the language/grammar isn't good still this tagline is loved by everyone :) All the best for your future business. Thanks

      • 2 vuotta sitten
  • DeepakBalana38
    DeepakBalana38
    • 2 vuotta sitten

    provide the feedback for entries give a kind look at Entry #19 , Entry #20, Entry #22 for the further improvements as its a good business practice thanks

    • 2 vuotta sitten
    1. Pepsibo1982
      Kilpailun järjestäjä
      • 2 vuotta sitten

      As I mentioned below we're not an office supplier, this is why I have rejected these ones

      • 2 vuotta sitten
  • DeepakBalana38
    DeepakBalana38
    • 2 vuotta sitten

    Entry #21, I would like to say after seeing the rating that you have provided that the tagline or strap line should not be simple sentence describing in simple words what you do. it must be catchy and having humor in itself. feature of tagline writing 1. It's memorable. 2. It includes a key benefit 3. It imparts positive feelings about the brand 4. just see the all the big company tag line viz. Nike: "Just Do It" Apple: "Think Different" BMW: "The Ultimate Driving Machine" Audi:"Advancement Through Technology"McDonald's: "I'm Lovin' It" so these all are having humor not just the simple sentence. it was my feedback so please go through my tagline again hope you will find all the qualities in my tagline which i have mentioned above. we are professional and give best service to our client after so much of research on task. thanks Feed me back

    • 2 vuotta sitten
  • vivekdaneapen
    vivekdaneapen
    • 2 vuotta sitten

    Please take a look at each entry and validate

    • 2 vuotta sitten
  • vivekdaneapen
    vivekdaneapen
    • 2 vuotta sitten

    You can still provide feedback and you will receive updated strap lines as messages. Without feedback nobody knows exactly which direction you are looking forward to

    • 2 vuotta sitten
    1. Pepsibo1982
      Kilpailun järjestäjä
      • 2 vuotta sitten

      ok, thank you, i will work through and provide feedback

      • 2 vuotta sitten
  • Pepsibo1982
    Kilpailun järjestäjä
    • 2 vuotta sitten

    Apologies for not giving any feedback, I'm new to this site and still figuring out how to use it.

    • 2 vuotta sitten
  • aaronlowcy
    aaronlowcy
    • 2 vuotta sitten

    Dear Sir, we would appreciate if you could kindly review and rate our entries. Thanks

    • 2 vuotta sitten
  • aaronlowcy
    aaronlowcy
    • 2 vuotta sitten

    Dear Sir, would appreciate if you could kindly review and rate our entries. Thanks

    • 2 vuotta sitten
  • DeepakBalana38
    DeepakBalana38
    • 2 vuotta sitten

    give a kind look at Entry #19 , Entry #20, Entry #21, Entry #22

    • 2 vuotta sitten
  • aaronlowcy
    aaronlowcy
    • 2 vuotta sitten

    Kindly review entry #27 . Thanks

    • 2 vuotta sitten
  • shaunaks2
    shaunaks2
    • 2 vuotta sitten

    Kindly go through entry #2

    • 2 vuotta sitten

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