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Hepburn Capitol Prospecting Letter

Hi, I'm fairly new to and am looking to work on similar projects as this, would appreciate your feedback, even if this is not necessarily the winning Entry. Thanks Kind Regards, Kim

Kilpailutyö #4 kilpailussa Write a prospecting letter that will get responses.

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  • urandi
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    We like the feminine "feel" to this letter. "we look after investments like we look after family." its very concise, which is good. we will review this again soon, really focusing on the points that are not in here that we thought were significant. Please continue to work on this, you are the only one so far that has posted anything useful. Also, can you look at our special report and see if it needs improving? Thanks so much for your time.

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