Please see attached. You have good points, which I have re-organised into sentences/paragraph format. In addition, a mission statement must convey the product/service you are selling, the target audience and if possible, how you solve their pain points, which I have succinctly done so in the first paragraph. In fact, the first paragraph itself can be the entire statement as statements tend to be short. But since you provided info on your core values, I have included just a concise summary of each of these. I hope you like it, Aaron. Do check my profile page for reviews on my past work done.