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Vitaliy Hayda
PFA my proof-read and perhaps a little improved version of your content. One suggestion though, while the quote from Dharmesh Shah suits with the tone set, if you can find a quote from Elon Musk with a similar message, it would be more apt, him being your role model. Also, please correct the inconsistency with the dates of you meeting your wife and moving to the US. Hope this helps. Good luck
