Freelancer: MatthewRyann
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First Entry

Hey! I put a few clips together in hopes you could let me know what you think. I tried out a few different things and wanted to see what you like and dislike before I went ahead and done more. Open to all criticism. I did an edit on the last clip to make it look like a much quicker kill. It looks good but I'm not sure if you would want to do that in case you don't want it to come across the wrong way. I wanted to run that by you first. Thanks a million.

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  • deatz
    Kilpailun järjestäjä
    • 2 kuukautta sitten

    Hey! The Beginning of the clip felt weird, not the first second with the Logo, but after that. I know you tried to match with the music I guess, but was still weird. I liked the style at the end, around 25 seconds with the "Boom" sequence. Thanks for the work so far!

    • 2 kuukautta sitten
    1. MatthewRyann
      • 2 kuukautta sitten

      I wasn't going for syncing with the music but tried showing more without taking too much away and without dragging the clip on too much. I'll change it and see what you think. Thanks you!

      • 2 kuukautta sitten