Freelancer: Jorfer47
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Hi Ally, I think it's great what you do with your company. I am sending you my proposal and I hope it helps you to unite more people to the cause. Greetings.

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  • AlexWatson
    Kilpailun järjestäjä
    • 2 kuukautta sitten

    Jorge I really really love this! I think you’ve really nailed the brief.

    It’s really late here in Australia so I’ll get back to you in the morning with a couple of points of feedback but nothing major.

    • 2 kuukautta sitten
    1. AlexWatson
      Kilpailun järjestäjä
      • 2 kuukautta sitten

      Hey Jorge,

      Some edits I’d love for you to make.

      - Add a subtle rotation to the stacked Code Like a Girl logo where used (counterclockwise @ 5 degrees)
      - Shorten the question transitions screens by 2 seconds each
      - Add “15% of software eng. graduates” overlay @ 0:27
      - The solution diagram: The laptop animation is a little jarring, could we smooth this?
      - The solution diagram: Instead of having the video in the center of the laptop could we stick with the original image that has the logo in the centre and make the laptop a little smaller once it stops animating
      - solution diagram: Can we slow down the reveal and start with student box first, maybe 3 seconds between each box appears
      - Final ask, is there anything you can do to improve audio quality?

      I am so pleased with how this has turned out. You’ve got a great eye for detail, pace and have just really understood our brand content and what we were trying to achieve. Really appreciate your efforts!

      • 2 kuukautta sitten
    2. Moustafaahmed33
      Moustafaahmed33
      • 2 kuukautta sitten

      Why sir did you close the contest I was uploading my design
      I hope that you will see it, I have made a great effort in it. I hope to appreciate it and give me the opportunity to work with you in the next period. I have more and more

      • 2 kuukautta sitten
  • Jorfer47
    Jorfer47
    • 2 kuukautta sitten

    Thank you for your message and for the feedback, I will work on the edits and send it to you again.
    Greetings!

    • 2 kuukautta sitten