The "v1" - more professional-like
Dear contest holder, this is the "v1" and my first take at improving your logo. I basically took your concept and used more professional typography, and switched the colors in "R" to double "E", as I found it more memorable and "eye-catchy". If you have any feedback, ideas or anything, don't hesitate to share please! Kind regards, Daniel.
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Kilpailun järjestäjä - 10 vuotta sitten
you're right "professionalization" of the logo is _exactly_ what this contest is about :)
looking forward to your next entry!- 10 vuotta sitten
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DanielDesign2810
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Thank you very much for the feedback :)
I'll keep the box along with rest of the design then, and try with the "R". Design wise, in general, do you like the typography used (or do you want less edgy, more rounded concept perhaps)? You might have noticed, although those are really small details, that I pitched up your color scheme a bit. I've picked some different shades of yellow along with red, green and blue, to make it a bit more eye-pleasing with easier contrast.- 10 vuotta sitten
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DanielDesign2810
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My thought originally (before I came up with "E" faced to the second "E" to basically make 4 little screens), was to use the R and perhaps make it a bit more like television-like, add some details perhaps and so on. So that will probably be my next submission. I reckon you don't want me to move away from the concept though and just "keep it as it is" as much as possible?
If there's anything else you don't like about this one, do tell please, I'll fix it and upload my next submission within next 16 hours (due to time-zone difference, as it's 01:30am here).- 10 vuotta sitten
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Kilpailun järjestäjä - 10 vuotta sitten
hello, thanks for the submission! we have a bit of a problem with the E's facing each other (mirror) as the same concept is used by a sister company of ours.
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DanielDesign2810
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Darn... :/ Not that it's actually hard to come up with though, as designers (including me), usually play with letters sometimes (just like your "R". Hmm...
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Kilpailun järjestäjä - 10 vuotta sitten
i like the box for int/sal
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Kilpailun järjestäjä - 10 vuotta sitten
i'm afraid we'll have to move away from it :(
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DanielDesign2810
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Any feedback is greatly appreciated so I can hit the spot more easily. Should you have any ideas or want anything changed, don't hesitate to tell! From the brief I gathered you want to exclusively keep the concept as much intact as possible, so I was afraid to move away from it more then I did. I just "professionalized" it for a notch up.
Kind regards,
Daniel.- 10 vuotta sitten
