1/ But why do we have the right side darker than the left one? It should be better if we had the same white (same light) on the right and on the left?.
2/ Page 1, the text "L'imprimeur des courts tirages.." should be a little bit bigger (bigger than the base line). Be Careful where you have cut the sentence : "L'imprimeur des courts tirages" has to be on the first line, then "à forte valeur ajoutée" underneath, on a second line (idem for all texts... Please refer yourself to my first presentation)
3/ Did you use Bodoni Classic Roman. Do you have it ?
I will make it same at both the side.
Also I will take care for the text and typo in next release. I did google for the Bodoni font, and I used that one. But if you have that font then please provide me so that I I will update that too.