Julkinen selvennystaulu

  • abidchy
    Kilpailun järjestäjä
    • 10 vuotta sitten

    Good use of colours and font sizes. I love the minimalist yet sophisticated look. The eye will focus on the background which will wow the visitor immediately, then the eye will re-focus on the three images and the main activity, everything else will help build trust.

    There are two things missing, the minibus and the journey i.e. the concept portrayed in the logo.

    Is there anyway you can incorporate a minibus with a logo on the side and place it on the page without disturbing the balance you've created?


    Also, I wonder how an internal page will look?

    Some additional information which might help:



    Replace the text:

    'Latest upcoming trip message goes here' with

    'Book your place on our camping trip this summer'


    In the footer add:

    MinibusAdventure.com (TM) 2013

    • 10 vuotta sitten
    1. grafixeu
      grafixeu
      • 10 vuotta sitten

      Hello

      I will work on an updated version asp this afternoon

      As regards the requirement with the minibus - I will create and use one / a generic bus for now

      If I will be succesfull contestant I will create an inner page design / model as well - and will work on possible modifications at no aditional cost.

      if you need more refferences about me and my work you can browse this blogs pages - where I uploaded few designs ... web & print

      http://grafixeuu.blogspot.ro/

      Best regards
      Alex

      • 10 vuotta sitten
  • abidchy
    Kilpailun järjestäjä
    • 10 vuotta sitten

    One more point, the logo colours are too bright. To make it go with your darkened colours and the images, it needs to become darkened too. So, please feel free to edit the logo accordingly.

    Thanks

    • 10 vuotta sitten