Thank you for participating in my contest.
Here is some feedback on your design:
I like the color usage and the usage of the letters in the billiard balls.
I also like the font you used it looks very smooth.
However I was wondering if you could make another design like this one using 3 billiard balls with the solid colors red, yellow and white. This is because my target audience mostly plays the billiard game called Carom Billiards, in this game they only use 3 balls ( red , yellow and white ). I was wondering how a design in this style but with those 3 balls would look like.
I'm still not 100% sure on which direction I want to take with my logo, so far I like the style of your design the best.
I hope you could add some variations based on the above feedback.